Together forever
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Together forever
"No! Don't leave me!" I said grabbing his arms. He couldn't speak, He was to weak. I had to think fast. I looked around the roomto see a home phone. Seconds later I found. I immdediatly called 911.
Soon after the paramedics came, My boyfriend was already dead. Now your probably asking "who is this guy? How did he die? Who are you? ". Just wait I'm getting to the good part. But I'll tell you my name. My name is Claire and i'm married well I used to be married. Here's the story.
It was an ordanary day working at my farm and my husband going to the stand that he works in the summer. You guessed it, It's Kai. After i was done with work, I went over to Kai's stand and we chatted for awhile. Soon after his work, we went home and had dinner as usual. But all to soon he had a seizure. I quickly called 911 but the paramedics were to late.
Now i'm all alone with my 3 year old daughter named Serena. She can't get over how her father died. But we didn't know howhe got a seizure. of course i never gave him anything bad to eat. I always gave him his favorite, Pineapples. What's so bad about pineapples? There only fruit. i called for an autopsy on Kai to see how he got a seizure. We were dieing to know how he got it. Soon I got into a depression state. My daughter Serena would always tried to cheer me up but i didn't have intrest in some things anymore.
In 3 weeks the results came back.
to be continued.
Soon after the paramedics came, My boyfriend was already dead. Now your probably asking "who is this guy? How did he die? Who are you? ". Just wait I'm getting to the good part. But I'll tell you my name. My name is Claire and i'm married well I used to be married. Here's the story.
It was an ordanary day working at my farm and my husband going to the stand that he works in the summer. You guessed it, It's Kai. After i was done with work, I went over to Kai's stand and we chatted for awhile. Soon after his work, we went home and had dinner as usual. But all to soon he had a seizure. I quickly called 911 but the paramedics were to late.
Now i'm all alone with my 3 year old daughter named Serena. She can't get over how her father died. But we didn't know howhe got a seizure. of course i never gave him anything bad to eat. I always gave him his favorite, Pineapples. What's so bad about pineapples? There only fruit. i called for an autopsy on Kai to see how he got a seizure. We were dieing to know how he got it. Soon I got into a depression state. My daughter Serena would always tried to cheer me up but i didn't have intrest in some things anymore.
In 3 weeks the results came back.
to be continued.
Last edited by 35bell on Sun Jul 26, 2009 4:01 pm; edited 1 time in total
35bell- Moderator
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Re: Together forever
OH NOZ!hes dead omg!continue continue,i wanna know how he died
MoNkEy!!- Moderator
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Re: Together forever
I read the results. They scared me and i didn't want to tell Serena. How he got the seizure is that he drank poison by accident. Who did it? A certain someone and his name was Rick. Kai's rival. I hated Rick from the start.
Serena gave me what-are-the-results face. I looked terrfied and Serena was determined. She was only 3, I couldn't tell her! I thought it over and i'll tell her when she's older, If I remember to tell her.
But What I know is that Me and kai will be Together forever.
The end! (:
Serena gave me what-are-the-results face. I looked terrfied and Serena was determined. She was only 3, I couldn't tell her! I thought it over and i'll tell her when she's older, If I remember to tell her.
But What I know is that Me and kai will be Together forever.
The end! (:
35bell- Moderator
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OMG!P-P-P-P-P-Poison?!how mean is Rick.what a beautiful story.good story too.
MoNkEy!!- Moderator
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I'm thinking of writing another story. XD Hop into the world of writing. XD
35bell- Moderator
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that was a great story genna .....brava
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Yes sir! XD
can you give me time of what to write about though? D8
can you give me time of what to write about though? D8
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35bell wrote:Yes sir! XD
can you give me time of what to write about though? D8
sure..gladly..
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