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Post  35bell Tue Jul 28, 2009 6:17 pm

This is going to be my RP character, she's has a pretty intresting story, I think T.T.
Anyways, kinda, Barely HM related.

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I looked at my hands with some sort of blank face. Of course, they were always dirty no matter what.

Why were they dirty?

Some of the things I steal are dirty.

Why do I steal?

Because My brother, Rickie, told me too. No, Don't look at me like that. You think Rickie is the bad guy and I'm the other bad person.

Kinda true

True, Rickie is the bad guy but now I only steal jewelry and stones. But that doesn't make me a bad person. What I mean by jewelry is by finding it in the mines. Ok ok I steal people's jewelry, But hey! I'm poor!

My mother said i was always the beautiful person in the family. But they're leaving out Nora. Nora was a blonde with blue eyes and tried to stop us from stealing. I was a a dark brown with blue eyes. That's not pretty, I'm just a plain brown hair girl who wears long skirts for some reason. Charlie was the youngest one. He was just a poor kid. Nothing intresting in life. Believe me, Charlie was a smart kid and i have to give credit for the guy.

But ever since Nora died, I hated Rickie, for life. When he asked me the same question that he asked Nora. I ran away that night.

Final Chapter~ (Unless decide to do more xD)

I Finally landed on the trail touching the dirt for some reason. I was some sort of smart person. I didn't know i had it until i touched the dirt. No it's a secret. I'm not telling. I'm not going to give a single hint. Soon I moved on and climbed a tree, Until some small figure came up to me. It touched my back and i fell off the tree.

"What the heck?" I said holding my head. I looked upand i saw a small fox and it literally smiled at me. "What the heck? Why is it looking at me like that?"I thought. The fox jumped down and landed right in front of me.

"*sigh* What do you want?" I said in a annoyed tone. The fox tilted it's head like it was confused. I rolled my eyes, sat in a criss cross apple sauce, Put my elbow on my knee, then rested my head on my hand. The fox ran up to me and licked me for some reason.

"Gaaaah! *laughing* S-Stop!!!" I said laughing and rolling on the floor. I finally grabbed the fox and smile. "Fine I'll keep you." Isiad smiling.

The end.. For now.


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Post  ClairexCliff Tue Jul 28, 2009 9:54 pm

go story!keep it up..
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Post  Natt77 Fri Jul 31, 2009 11:12 am

i agree! great story!
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Post  MoNkEy!! Fri Jul 31, 2009 2:47 pm

yea keep going!
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Post  ClairexCliff Sun Aug 02, 2009 12:42 am

please more please more!!
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Post  35bell Sun Aug 02, 2009 9:51 am

Whoa! Shocked Um Brain dead right now. Will write next chapter in a few hours. >.>
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Post  MoNkEy!! Sun Aug 02, 2009 8:05 pm

Smile okey dokey ill read it when your done then!
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Post  ClairexCliff Tue Aug 04, 2009 3:32 am

i'll be looking forward for it..
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Post  Pain Giver Wed Aug 05, 2009 2:05 am

good story..can't wait for the rp zone.
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Post  35bell Wed Aug 05, 2009 9:13 pm

new chapter on the first post. Smile
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Post  ClairexCliff Thu Aug 06, 2009 3:42 am

seen it and admired it..good job Genna!
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Post  35bell Thu Aug 06, 2009 9:13 am

Uh Thank you >.<. I'll probably make another story next week. I still need to think xD
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Post  ClairexCliff Sat Aug 08, 2009 3:28 am

i can't wait for it!
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Post  Natt77 Sun Aug 16, 2009 2:51 am

so cute!
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Post  ClairexCliff Tue Aug 18, 2009 3:18 am

second the motion..

please make more!
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Post  35bell Tue Aug 18, 2009 8:18 pm

ahhh! O.O Let me think *runs in circles*
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Post  ClairexCliff Wed Aug 19, 2009 12:24 am

make sure..it's more better than last one..
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Post  35bell Fri Aug 21, 2009 7:34 pm

I will try my best xD
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Post  ClairexCliff Fri Aug 21, 2009 11:13 pm

and i hope your vest will be a enough..
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